33 lines of 3’s…Numero 2 – The Waterfall. Eden.

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The second story in my little writing challenge for 2013. Each line must begin with a word that starts with the same letter as the last word on the line before it. 3 words in a line, 33 lines in zee story…

The waterfall mesmorisedwaterfall 1

Many a tourist

Tamzin was surprised

Such strong emotions

Evoked by beauty

Beyond anything previous

(Penzance on Ice)

Ignited her desire

Dancing. Staring. Swimming

Soaking it in

Ingers sat still

She too, mesmorised

Memories flashed by

Butlins paled against

Tamzin’s watery destination

Dizzy standing underneath

Undetered by force

Friends sharing falls

Fulfilling her entirely

Each moment perfect

Pertaining the pouring

Pounding her ears

Excited but scared

Skillfully she stood

Shy yet bold

But should she

Share her love

Little by little

Leaning on God

Guilty and Innocently

Ingers told Tamzin

Temptation coursed throughout

Tamzin kissed her

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About Littlebeut333

'Random Spillages from a Reportedly Strange mind’… Hello all :) I’m Dawny, the littlest of the Beuts..and my brain spillage content varies from the profoundly philosophical, to utter bilge ://…Life is my inspiration. I write about friends, love, the soul, society, shrinks, people, labels, home, mothers, perfect moments, dirty politicians, music, pain, beauty, women, religion, god, mental health, the demise of humanity!!! etc…hence the ‘random’. All spilled through the eye of my ‘ever musing, slightly philosophical mind’. Although I write mostly for enjoyment, and to empty my oh so busy head; sharing my snippets appeals to me, and I also love reading the thought trails of others. I would be most chuffed if anyone comes across my page and has a browse (and if you do, thanks in advance). I guess the biggest compliment would be if, for you, my rambles are either :- slightly different from the norm, enjoyable, amusing, unenjoyable, and/or thought/emotion provoking. Whatever them thoughts or emotions might be…The good, the bad, the ugly..and everything in between!! ;)… I accidently fell in love with writing a while ago, and from that time, my inspiration has come solely from lifes varied encounters, feelings, knowledge, memories and thoughts. Welcome to my archives, to some sections of my mind :0 Dawny

6 responses »

  1. Hey Iamforchange! Hope your good 🙂 Thanks for being such a super duper follower, I appreciate your comments so much. I do believe it was a PERFECT kiss! Kissing is my favourite activity…Luv Dawny 🙂

  2. Hey Elaine, thanks so much for your comment and the compliment, It hadn’t crossed my mind that it might be clever in the eyes of another, so danke muchly…Dawny 🙂

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